How can you say you love me,
when all you do is make me cry?
Why do I stay with you,
when all you do is tell me lies?
Why is it that you go to her,
when you know it hurts me so bad?
Do you like to see me feel so low?
Do you like to see me sad?
Can't you see what you do to me?
Don't you see the pain in my eyes?
Each time you come home soaked in her scent,
you know my feelings can't be disguised.
Why can't I make you go away?
How can I let you stay?
You know you've always been my world.
I can't seem to push you away.
I have hope in my heart,
that one day you'll wake up and see,
how much I've always loved you,
and you'll once again love me.
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Written June 24th, 2005
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Wow I really feel your pain in this poem Guys are so cruel sometimes but yet we still stay with them. I guess that's just the "GAME OF LOVE"!
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Good job. This is very deep and emotional, and very to the point. It gives the reader an exact image of the scene, and describes it perfectly. I loved how you ended this. Great job!!!
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Thank You very much for stopping by and for the wonderful comment on this. (experiencial) lol and it is a very good made up word. This was my life at one time, but not now. I am married now with three beautiful children. I am very happy now.
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I thought I would come over and read some of your poetry. Very good structure, rhyme, rhythm and flow. An excellent poem. I hope you are not writing from experiencial emotion. (I made the word up) as I would not like you to be having this heart ache. Jim
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Oh that was soo sad. I hope this isn't a true story in your life. You did a wonderful job on this!
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great write
this is a great write, i love the way that you have kept emotion in it all the way through. I also like the rhyme it works really well you've done a great job wit it. It's sad that so many people can relate to this poem in the way that they can, and that you yourself had to go through it. I hope that one day whoeve it is comes to their sences and realises what they do hurts you.
Thanks for your comment.
StephX
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Tnx for the comment on my poem.
You did a GREAT job on this poem. I loved it 2 peices! Keep up the great work!
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Sounds like a Liz Phair song.
Nice lyric poem. It has a bouncy cadence and full of Kleenex textures...Thank you for sharing!
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Great write. This is fantastic, full of emotion! The rhyming is delightful... Great write
I look forward to reading more 
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Yes, we do Thankfully! Thank You for your comment on this. I appreciate it and the encouragement they bring.
Hugs
Brandy
Edited on Jun 24, 9:21 p.m. because 'lol! Can you beileve it I spelled my name wrong
hee hee I must be getting tired.'.
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Oh, do I know this feeling all too well! Sigh...but then, I think we all grow from it in some way or another when it happens to us! Great piece. All the best to you always,
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Thank You all for your wonderful comments. I really appreciate them. Very Much so.
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I can relate to this poem quite a bit.This is a good poem,but it brought back so many memories.Now I know what I want and dont want in a guy. Good poem, I really like it.Keep up the good work.
-Bean
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Great
I really love this poem . I think every women in the world can relate to this feeling I know I can Thanks so much. -
Thank You so much for your comment. I am very happy that you liked it. Thank you also for your applause.
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this poem is awsome. i def. can relate to this poem. great job.
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I LOVE IT
WOW! its wonderful i can sometimes feel that way i love it great job
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