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Juana

                     
                      *J*ust another girl in the crowd,
                      *U*nique in her own special way,
                      *A*dmired all who know her,
                      *N*ice and sweet how she should be,
                      *A*cknowledged as a superior cadet
                                 by the army...
                              to be continued.....

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this is a brief description of me...if you disagree plz feel free to let me know...
Written June 24th, 2005

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  • sky black
    June 29, 2005
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    dont really know you so i cnt pass judgement although this sounds about right, and its a wonderful little poem wish i could do that for my name but mine's werid and invovles thinking. isnt this on your author page? w/e. lol, l8az sky xxxxx

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    June 24, 2005
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    WELL DONE

    Very nice. I have no doubt that you're all the things you describe yourself . . . and more!
    Good write. Thanks for sharing it.
    Brian