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Seeking Peace

Iced rain hailing down
All is silent in my room.
Still,
Calm,
I listen

All about wild wind thrashes
Rain hammers, thunder crashes.
Still,
Calm,
I listen

Slowly,
Quietly
I unfold my mind to hear
Peace
Inside
The storm

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Written May 23rd, 2005

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  • Stella Shall
    June 26, 2005
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    This is beautiful i love the way you have used spaces to create a feeling of calm of peace and then ran your words together to create the confusion of the storm. A very cleverly crafted and beautiful piece.


  • Ray Von
    June 26, 2005
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    I loved the way that it was spiritual but I was seing it infront of me
    Your way of expressing what you felt at that moment was excellent really lovely,lovely ,lovely,lovely
    this is absolutely fabbity fab
    Maria


  • LionessK silver member
    June 24, 2005
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    What a lovely image of this thought and feeling. I like your words choice very much. I hope you will continue to write and share your words here with us all. Welcome to allpoetry, if you have any questions feel free to ask any greeter or you can use the "Help" tab at the top of your page...
    enjoy the site

    ~Kristy