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Fuck you (re-edit)

 

God, i fucking hate you!
i wish that you would die,
your a mother fucking wanker
i just want to see you cry.
Your mum is such a MILF
its a shame that shes got AIDS
its probably cuz she's jacking off
all those fucking gays.
when i heard that you had cancer
i just had to laugh,
i wanted to see you suffer
walking down the path,
to having chemotherapy
i hope your hair falls out,
i'd love to see you waste away
and not know what its about.
And what about those Africans
who have fuck all to eat,
you would love to go there
so that they could all meet,
the fattest motherfucker
(that is you by the way),
so you can get a load of food
and throw it all away,
and watch the poor ill children,
on their hands and knees
scrabbling for some scaps
maybe a few chick-peas.
Cuz your a sicko piece of shit,
i bet you fiddle kids,
i told you not to mess with
their reproductive bits.
But in the end your just a dickhead,
a dirty piece of shit,
a motherfucking wanker,
with a swollen clit.
Please do us a favour,
and jump under a train,
i'd love to see you suffer
i'd love to see your pain.

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Please don't read this out of context look at the contest brief, theres a link at the top of the page. Otherwise you will hate me. Before it wasn't a poem now its been modified.
Written June 24th, 2005

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  • tamralynn2004
    July 27, 2005
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    I think that this is a pretty well written poem. Obviously, some people should devote more time to making themselves feel good than tearing others down. Had you read some of the author's own work, you may have come up with some really insulting stuff. Better luck next time.


  • Shifty
    July 2, 2005
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    not original!? what about the bit with starving africans? thats pretty original

  • oOo Nicole oOo
    July 1, 2005
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    lol Its Great!

  • Evilia
    July 1, 2005
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    I have to agree with Outtie... none of it was very original. It kinda sounds like a bunch of 12-year olds on the playground trying to look cool for their little friends. I've been more insulted by bad 'yo momma' jokes, frankly.


  • Shifty
    July 1, 2005
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    Fuck you!


  • Outtie
    July 1, 2005
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    that was an amaturish piece of crap!!!

    you were just trying to hard to offend, nothing was original.

    you didnt even have stanzas, which makes it hard and fucking annoying to read

    0.5 out of 10 for effort, it didnt offend me at all

    outtie

  • Green-Blue
    June 30, 2005
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    I think that's gonna be hard to beat


  • Thoughtcrime
    June 29, 2005
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    nicer

    I like the re-edit.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    June 27, 2005
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    Fucking dreadful.


  • Iambenign
    June 24, 2005
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    LOl that was a great entry. I hope you win. That really is a great poem to insult people with.HEHE


  • Shifty
    June 24, 2005
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    Fuck you!


  • Thoughtcrime
    June 24, 2005
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    Nice insults

    That convinced me, ha ha you should win.

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