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Your Heart

I'll walk willingly into your worn-out heart
Slowly chisel away at the ice
Deep within the loneliest parts of you
Use my hands to mend the broken parts
Dig a little under the carnage and rubble
Find that there's still hope in growing a deeper love
I'd bury my heart within yours
Let it take root and melt ice where I could not reach.

Author notes

OK.. I know this is definately not done.  This just came out and I needed to get it out somewhere.  Let me know what I need to change or add to it.  Give me suggestions.  Thanks.
Written June 24th, 2005

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  • Forgotten truth
    January 5, 2006
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    cool so fare but doesn't flow so well, may be you can end it both your hearts becoming one, i seems to be about falling in love again after being hurt,,