Imagine airy imagery
Sin, oh nymphs? (None for synonym, to tell you the truth,
I find that rather irking
that is to say jerking
that is to say, not working
)
Take me there, oh where?
your hair
('re?)
because its' just not working so then I
go not grow not know but go
the 13 year old trying to be Edgar freaking Allen fucking Poe
Or Jhonen Vasquez
*()
Classic Ravioli wins everytime,
find me the better oh Spartacus
and give me the cross upon which
you impale yourself like your
wannabe follower of 33AD
He takes the beard and trims it of all lice!
Born on Christmas while the shepherds froze in the fields
Tilling the mountains of souls while the trees reigned supreme
now inferior
(no () necessary)
Looks like the hole between a girls' legs doesn't it you know you were thinking it every time you saw () you just looked down and said "oh yeah" but I digress because mary magdalene inspired your church's hall look at the spires, the windows
the cavernous corrider
and ask yourself, Who Will Help The Marolvingian's Son?
perhaps too complex not
now?
now, not!
for the sun rises across the ocean
while humanity throws its stones in
oh shit, oh cunt oh fuck where is my imagery
(Imaginary?)
No we are real we are all real
We're really in your head you fool
No, you are the fool
But you don't exist,
so
I am the fool
No
(w) shut up and take these pills and you will feel
(George, of course) better
Pfizer is your only realizer
back to bland
back to real you fake-ed deal
take us back take us back
though we did not miss you
You can be left alone now. I so sorry.
Author notes
Written June 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Amaze Me [1000 points] by Something Real.
1000 points, ended June 18, 2006, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This was strange, but in a good way.
Quite an interesting piece!
Thanks for entering and good luck! -
Okay, sorry, I guess I wasn't that clear about the rules. My bad. Thanks for giving it a read, at least! See you around, and if you have any other contests, I'll be happy to enter something
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While this was a very original and thought provoking piece of poetry, I'm afraid I'm going to have to remove it unless you can make some changes...I truly don't like hard core swearing. If you wish to keep it as an original piece of art, please let me know so that I may remove it. It's definatly a winner, but not what I'm looking for in my contest.
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this was an amazing peice of poetry. what i was really looking for. untill this contest is over cross your fingers and hope because i still have more to read but this is something....maybe a winner?!
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