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I Miss

I miss...
   the little kisses,
   on my ear

   being around you,
   and having no fear
 
   the sweet little sayings,
   things I like to hear

   just holding each other,
   and you being near

   when I was around you,
   cause I had no tears

   everything, but most of all,
   when you were here

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • Hope-87
    July 11, 2005
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    Thanks, I really hope you get to come down. I miss you. Yeah this poem was about Chris. Read Broken. That was about him. I had such a hard time writing it. I cried rereading it to. Love you!!


  • July 11, 2005
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    Hey this poem is really good Karessa. And thanks for the message about my poem. I miss you too. I might come see you in October for fall break. Tell JJ I miss her when you get a hold of her. I love you and things will get better I promise. I will see you later or at least talk to you later. Luv ya Tiff