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My Dearest God

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Dear God I need you in my life
to guide me through my fears
give me strength to face the day
God please dry up all my tears

Many of my family are non Christian
Satan prowls my house everyday
God stand by me make me strong
please listen to me God as I pray

God I need some reassurance  now
that my friends will stay with me
I love them dearly and need them
to teach me about Christianity

You have blessed me with them
please don't take them away
let me know they are there for me
now and forever and a day

Let me always feel their sunshine
their laughter and their smiles
let me know they care for me
send there love across the miles

Dear God you are so amazing
I need you in my life each day
please help me dry up all my tears
dear God you are here to stay 

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    June 25, 2005
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    Thank you so much joanne for the lovely comment and the advice on the typo. Both are greatly appreciated. Take care. God Bless you. Sandy
    Edited on Jun 25, 6:36 because ''.


  • thelordreigns gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    This is a wonderful letter to God and I know He is answering all your prayers. He is so good to us. God bless you and lots of love from your friends here at AP! - joanne

    (the next to last stanza has 2 theres that s/b "their" if it matters....)


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 23, 2005
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    Thank you so much my dear daughter. You make me feel so special. Thank you for that. Ashleyyou are always such a joty to talk to. Don't ever change. Always stay as sweet and nice as you are. God Bless you. Mom. Love you.


  • agalford7053
    June 23, 2005
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    I love this Sandy and its really good. here is some love from miles away.. xoxoxoxoxxox...lol.. I like how your poured your heart out to God telling him that you needed your Christian friends to help you.. and that you needed them to be there for you. I also like how you said "God you are here to stay" instead of asking if he was here to stay..
    I love how you expressed yourself in this amazing poem.
    Thank you for entering my contest mum.. and Good luck.. (lol)
    love ya and God Bless
    ~Ashley~