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Snow Cones (Shape Poem)

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • Entwining Beauty
    July 22, 2008
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    yummy i love chocolate Excellent form good luck


    • Sherry gold member
      July 22, 2008
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      Chocolate snow cones? Noway really????Thanks...


  • Theater Of Dreams
    April 1, 2006
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    Precious 2!

    I haven't had a sno-cone, nor ice-cream in a...ummm...oh heavens. BRAINLESS!!! I have no clue how I got here either! I was commenting on a 'bear shaped' poem...poof...

    You must be sick of me. Please forgive.
    I love these...I do. memories of days long gone.


  • Silky Origami
    January 20, 2006
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    Yes, I read Hersheys and Bear and ring -ring!

  • Sherry gold member
    October 21, 2005
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    I'm glad you enjoyed this thanks for the read. I do mine just a bit different then the other shape poetry. But I'm proud of them my tree will be in a children's book come next year.
    Sherry~


  • StegsGirl
    October 21, 2005
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    wow... when I was in creative writing class last year... we learned about shape poems... and I laughed because I had never seen one before... and yet you have a bunch of them... and they are wonderful... great job... makes me want to go eat a snow cone


  • Sherry gold member
    September 30, 2005
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    Thanks glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate your comment and time.
    Sherry


  • strawberryz-n-cream
    September 30, 2005
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    excellent

    Hi. I really like this. Makes me want a show cone lol. It reminds me of the hot summer days! I really like this. Take care and keep up the wonderful work.

  • Sherry gold member
    September 27, 2005
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    Thanks so much my first comment from you yay! I'm honored to have a new friend and happy you enjoyed this. Some took a few hours others I did more quickly. You've been a treat to my evening I really appreciate it. Sherry


  • Cat gold member
    September 27, 2005
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    These are really creative- i can only imagine the effort put into them.

    Mary

  • Sherry gold member
    August 24, 2005
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    Thanks Poo,
    I am glad you liked it I know you enjoy my shapes hehe :-) We should do one sometime:-) At times my wording though gets all mixed up how I word things so I kinda do better with shorter form poetry. Love, Sis


  • ShaShay
    August 24, 2005
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    You do a wonderful job with shapes. They could fit into a children's book as well.
    ~~~POO~~~
    Edited on Aug 24, 4:54 p.m. because ''.

  • Sherry gold member
    July 29, 2005
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    Thanks my friend my shapes aren't always simple well the words to them are but the shape itself is sometimes very complex. I hope you have a wonderful day talk to you later. Sherry
    Edited on Jul 29, 9:45 because ''.

  • swanpool
    July 29, 2005
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    Thasnks for making me smile, your good at that.I make my own ice cream, and in the summer there is always half adozen of my childrens friends around just about the time I usually dish it up. This was so simple, but so well thought out. Great.


  • Sherry gold member
    June 27, 2005
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    Thanks, I didn't want you to miss the treat Glad ya enjoyed.
    Sherry~


  • Jacki D
    June 27, 2005
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    See how talented you are. I wouldn't even attempt this!! You amaze me w/these shape poems.


  • Sherry gold member
    June 26, 2005
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    Thank ya Yay


  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 26, 2005
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    Very cute!!! I liked it mucho. It shows where your strengths are. Well done.

  • Sherry gold member
    June 24, 2005
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    Thanks Vickie glad you enjoyed hope it was refreshing in that Texas heat your probably having with us to....Wouldn't a snow cone taste good Love ya, Sherry ♥


  • Vickie J
    June 24, 2005
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    very cute, Sherry! this is definitely one of your talents


  • Sherry gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    I'm so glad you saw this one thank you (((mom)))
    Love, me ♥ ♥


  • Lilredlll
    June 23, 2005
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    refreshing!

    Yumm now that hit the spot... I like the shape of this one baby girl too. Now if I could just have one of those for real
    Mama Linda


  • Sherry gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    Thanks heard from Susan how shes doing ? Sherry
    Edited on Jul 23, 8:11 p.m. because ''.


  • Maureen silver member
    June 23, 2005
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    Hey Sis! Your "Snow Cone" is cool! I wish I had a real one right now! Very nicely done!

    Hugs,
    ♥ Maureen

  • Sherry gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    Thank you for your comment Donna. I am glad you enjoyed this.
    Its going to be in the 90s tomorrow its humid I think its giving me a headache tonight. Sherry
    Edited on Jun 23, 7:17 p.m. because ''.


  • BluRosePoet8488
    June 23, 2005
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    Sherry...
    I think a snow cone would be pretty tasty right now. It's 87 here right now. Was about 95 earlier today. WOW! That's hot! And this is one cool poem babe. I love this! Perfect in every way!!! Ya did good, Sherry!!! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~
    Edited on Jun 23, 6:34 p.m. because ''.


  • Sherry gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    Thank you ♥ yay!!!! You liked it yay!!! ♥
    (((hugs thank you Mari))))


  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    I think it's perfect like this! Now I feel like eating ice cream This one looks like raspberry.
    Well done Sherry
    Kisses,
    Mari

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