To a certain someone:
"Sorry" is not worth it,
That word,
Like "love",
Is over used.
Is it because they are so often used together?
Well, even if it is too late,
And you don't accept it,
I do mean it.
To another certain someone:
Does it glorify you to know
That you've f*cked up everything?
But who am I kidding?
It's all on me.
I'm the one in love with someone else.
I can't say I ever loved you,
I can say I hated you.
And even as I write this,
I smile knowing,
THE TRUTH IS FINALLY OUT
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Written June 23rd, 2005
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wow this was awesome. this was so brutally honest. i loved how you split it into the two sections for two different people. the stanza about the combination of love and sorry struck me as genius! absolutely brilliant... this gets an applause!
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The other side of the moon sees us all -
This sounds like something I need to write. Great job!
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Wow this is something that I can so easily relate to. Especialy the 2nd part, "to another certan someone". I know what a relief it is to finally let the truth out after so many lies. It really echos the situation I was in, so much so it;s scary, lol. You did an absolutly amazing, fantastic job. I just love this.
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dude this poem rox muh pants! wow this is great. keep writing cause i'm looking forward to seeing more!
o yea, ur on my fav.s too! 
suicide ya later - Tiffany 
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I like this poem a lot, how you seemed just to break out at the end, with 'THE TRUTH IS FINALLY OUT' nice finishing touch.
-I'm just a FATAL MisTAKE<3-
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