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I Hate You

 

Can we not forget the past?
Lingering like it is important.
No past,
No future,
What is there to look forward to?
Water falls like tear drops,
Flowing at every thought.
Is it a sin to regret?
Is it a sin to cry out in pain?

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • WhrUwan2B
    August 13, 2005
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    Short and sweet and to the point. I like this poem a lot. it just stabs you with the meaning and sometimes that's how it needs to be! Awesome write!


  • -frozen tears-
    June 23, 2005
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    well put, i can relate to this A LOT