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Hate is a powerful word

Now you finally get what you deserve
You deserve to be buried deep with no convictions
You deserve to be thrown away
Far, Far away
So far so no I eye can see
Don't you see you hurt us all?
All you thought were vulnerable
Now no one will help you or your self-destructive low life
Hopefully now you'll see
How much you really hurt me

Author notes

I like this poem because a guy that i liked i found out had a list of girls he liked and that he wanted to get with so bascially he was just using me and my friends and it really pissed me off!!!
Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • -Kortnie-
    June 23, 2005
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    Your poem was awsome!!!!!!!!! tho hehe

  • -Kortnie-
    June 23, 2005
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    OMg.....If this si about Brain.......POOP On him!! girl you deserve much better...i know you like him and all but you cant let that get to you. You got to move on. Here is a qoute tat my best friend gave to me and it helped me put alot.: NEVER LEAVE THE ONE YOU LOVe FOR THE ONE YOU LIKE,CAUSE THE ONE YOU LIKE WILL LEAVE YOU FOR THE ONE THEY LOVE" I dont know how much it will help you but it might help a lil. BUt whatever you decide im here for you! I love you so friggin much!!!