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Inspiration of Hate

Eternally looking down,
commanding
Is your soapbox high enough?
High enough to see every mistake.
Perfection is out of reach,
Yet forced to reach.

One hour wasted,
52 hours wasted.
Never comprehending change,
Never seeing proof,
Yet always searching for reality.

Six to one,
Which one wins?
What makes sense?
You could change it if you wanted.
Craving attention,
You're so fake!

WHO DESERVES THE BURDEN OF PAIN?
UNATTAINABLE EXPECTATIONS DO LITTLE TO INSPIRE.
Typicality cuts your desires into wishful thinking.
Apathy over takes us,
The thought of you is lost.

One life wasted,
52 lives wasted.
Is this what you call love?
It's all the same to you.

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • Jazz a Trazz
    June 23, 2005
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    wow, thats very good, very powerful. i really like it, great write!