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Everyone makes mistakes

I dont know what to do
I dont want to lose you

But i see your fading away
more and more every day


I can see it your eyes
I can tell at night you cry

Last night i called
I was apauled

You didnt answear your phone
I fell like im alone

I cant let you go
I wont let it happen

I lied
I do want  you by myside

I know i keep making mistakes
I know everytime i do your heart brakes

Im young
Im tyring my best


I dont mean to hurt you
I really dont
And i promise i wont

Im gonna try harder
im gonna love you like before
No more dancing with guys on the dance floor

You are the one that i want
Your the one that i love
Your my white dove


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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • SethStar
    January 6, 2006
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    wonderful

    very honest reaches the heart

  • -Kortnie-
    June 23, 2005
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    THanks...u will!!! Trust me!!!!

  • Mj 16
    June 23, 2005
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    You are really good I hope I can get better