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SaMe

every day,
same thing,
over and over again,
everything was the same,
nothing ever changed,
i found myself bored out of my mind,
i never did anything fun or exciting,
but,
all of that changed the day i met you.
ever since i met you,
my world has been turned upside down...
ever since i met you....
nothing has been the Same...

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Written June 23rd, 2005

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  • sky black
    June 29, 2005
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    im guessing you've met someone special, and im happy for you really i have, its always nice to have that someone special there for you! nice write and im glad this one was long. l8az sky xxxx

  • MisCherryDee
    June 23, 2005
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    Awesome

    wow kool love it so can relate to in a way well great job !!!!


  • My Inner Soul
    June 23, 2005
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    WOW DUDE!!!!!!

    wow!! KEEP IT UP MAN!!!!!!!

  • poet18
    June 23, 2005
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    Very sweet poem
    well done :-)

  • mysteryfriend
    June 23, 2005
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    hey angel305 i like this poem it is really good i can relate to it

  • preciouscatie
    June 23, 2005
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    beautiful

    wow juana this poem is sooo cute it really is deep and touching makes me think of what u know and the same as you. i really love this poem one of my personal favs.im really glad you can express your self throughout writing keep it up!!!!^^^^***

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