Why do you insistently tell me you want me?
But then make it seem so untrue
Your feelings made clear, for me to see
When I tell you I'm falling for you
"You've got to be good, I've got a girl"
Or so you keep on saying
With your every word, my insides whirl
Do you want me, or are you just playing?
So I want a straight answer, is that such a crime?
If you think so then why don't you sue?
But you'll always be hers, and you'll never be mine
So what else is left for me to do?
Author notes
Written June 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- I Love Him, I Love Him Not......♥ Ends REALLY Soon...So Hurry In!! by xCandieKissesx.
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Aww..This is so touching and sweet. You did a fabulous job with this piece. Great work! Good luck in the contest!
Jackie ♥ -
yes love is a very confusing thing...i know what itz like to be in this spot....that is how my depression started...sucks...great write...keep it up!!!
Cyndi -
Meh hugs you
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good, id hate to be in this situation tho :S. lvoe is hard and confuzing good poem!
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great poem i like the emotion envolved in it this poem helps explain how confussing love can be great job
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