This is a letter
To whom it may concern
I've been looking for you
Almost everywhere
But I can't find you
Seems like you just don't care
I talk to you so much
Feels like I'm on crack
What kind of being are you
If you never answer back
I don't
Want to feel alone
I thought
You were always suppose to be there
Just seems like
You really don't care
No one really sees you
No one knows really knows you
Why don't you just come out
And clear things up a little
You've got everyone
Thinking you're someone great
But how can that be
When you're not what you seem
I don't
Want to feel alone
I thought
You were always suppose to be there
Just seems like
You really don't care
After all this time
I've been trying to find you
And I fail
Maybe this means
Means you're not real
I write to you
To find out the truth
Are you really
What they say you are
They say that if I can't hear you
That your love, I should still feel
But if I don't get an answer
Then I guess that you're not real
I don't
Want to feel alone
I thought
You were always suppose to be there
Just seems like
You really don't care
This is a letter
To whom it may concern
Please give me something
So I don't feel alone
Author notes
commented on The Stench
Written June 23rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Clever Richard by Vampstress.
300 points, ended July 6, 2005, 18 entries
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This is very clever, at first I wondered who this was to but got the impression by the end you must have been speaking to 'God' Nice flow loved the content. Please read the contest again as I would hate to have to disqualify a great poem. Thanks for entering and good luck.
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hey whats up? that was really good.... i really liked that.... keep up the good work..... your so much better then my boyfriend..... shhh.... dont let him know i said that.... but anyhoo.... loved it.... okay byebye.... much love.... love always n forever your friend.... autumn -
I get it! That guy upstairs right? Upstairs, get it. Anyway, good write bro.
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wow for this not bein finished its really good! great job with it
keep up the great work n keep on writing.. take care
♥Jessica Lee
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