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handle with care

Fragile! Handle with care!
This glass is very special,
so beautiful, something many take for granted,
tossing this object around,
like it's nothing to them.
How can they be so careless?
Many don't know it's true worth,
Those who do are persuaded by those who don't,
Persuasion is such a dirty act,
filled with lies and deceit
This beautiful piece of art has seen the world,
Mostly through others eyes but what an adventure,
Yes, it may be a priceless object,
But please handle with care,
This object is very fragile and close to gone,
But I still hold on dearly,
For this priceless object beaten by persuasion 'tis my heart.

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Written June 22nd, 2005

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  • RazorbladeRomance17
    June 25, 2005
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    this is very good i love i tthanx for entering the contest sorry its so short but i'm trying to comment everyone