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Deprived Souls

For deprived souls...
Feeling lonely, insecure about ourselves,
Is what we have to behold,
Thou it may be in others jurisdiction,
That what a sin we must of commented,
Its the only thing that makes us feel alive,
The only thing that makes us survive,
In this self conceited world,
Where everything wrong and never right,
Where people cant open their minds,
To new things,
To ecstasy,
To the pleasures that await them,
Thou they say we may perish,
And burn in the self consuming flames of hell,
Thus we will be at peace with ourselves.

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Written June 22nd, 2005

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