As i glance into your eyes,
I know you won't remember me in the morning.
Each morning,
never knowing what to expect.
Will you remember me,
or will you forget?
There is always satisfation,
when you remember.
My heart fills with delight,
as you say my name.
To know I was not forgotten,
is a beautiful sight.
Forgotten love,
is sweetest,
when remembered.
Author notes
This is about the notebook, and how Noah must have felt about Allie in the end. I hope you like it!
Love,
Hannah
And yes,I actually wrote a love poem Jenny!
Written June 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- "The Notebook" by Lost In My Thoughts.
300 points, ended June 26, 2005, 3 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Yea Hanny they are good to write. I love it! That movie is so cute and sweet. Amazing Job!
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This is so much better, Hannah!!! I loved it. You did an excellent job reworking this! It is beautiful just like it is now
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Thank you for your comment Josie, it helped me a lot. I did rewrite it, so take a look if you wanna! Thank you so much!
Love,
Your sister Hannah -
Hannah, I felt the emotional aspect of this poem worked perfectly. The only thing I did not like was the repitition of ideas in almost every stanza, especially the last line. The concept presented is clear, maybe just needs a little rewording. I wish you the best of luck in the contest sweetheart
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This is a good poem, and thank you so much for writing it for my contest. Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest!
Tiffany
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AWWW... I didn't ever watch that movie all the way through!!! I guess I'll have to now!!! Great poem and good luck in the contest Hannah!!!
Hugs,
Beth
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