when that feeling comes as
between your thighs
it shakes and jerks
you close your eyes
and your thong rubs mine
from side to side
your hands rub down
and you fall on the ground
your rub faster and harder
and "oh, baby like that"
don't stop or I'll kill you
now turn on your back
because theirs nothing sexier
than your breasts against mine
two woman in need
of two glasses of wine
and all i want to do
is thrust against you
because your Venus feels better
feels hot and alive
when i tongue you inside
Author notes
Written June 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- Erotica Please! by BeautifulAngelicSin.
300 points, ended August 5, 2005, 14 entries
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Wow. To read this from my little one lol. Almost like something I've written here and there and that makes me smile cause we're so alike. This was bloody well written darling
Mum
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awsome
im a chick, ans i am not lesbian or bi, but i sadly agree with you when you say that the thought of two willing women being loving being a very stimulating...
about the poem... for some reason in my head this ran very well with the tunnel scene from the first willly wonka scene(i cant wait to see the next) i dont know why but in my head it tiook place and read well there... which is strange... but i love the poem in itself its a great write. -
...speechless
Holy shit, that was awesome. Very nicely done, and the flow of the poem was perfect. Wow...
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