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haiku ~ petals



limp pungent petals
tattered across torn sheets
passion’s ravages



Patricia Gibson-Williams


Author notes

I wrote 3 of these and couldn't decide which I liked best.  Oh well, here is the last one I wrote; I hope you like it.

Patti
Written June 22nd, 2005

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    Such a sensual imagery!
    Sensual ans subtle, well done!
    Thanks for this read and all the best to you always!
    Mari


  • SirPort
    June 22, 2005
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    Lovely

    Yesssss! this is lovely indeed.


  • Samplette gold member
    June 22, 2005
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    This haiku has some vivid imagery within the three lines. Very nicely done. Best wishes in the contest.
    Sam