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An Intimate Caption






He imagined-
             
              thus creates
He exceeds

             thus continues;

nothing I could

            proportion could ever come close

to however far He's come

at first

so  very close to me.

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Written June 22nd, 2005

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  • EmptyAccount
    July 26, 2005
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    Amazing, especially the first four lines which just garbbed me and demanded the entirety of my attention and everything else be damned. Amazing background for this piece too, inspiring; awesome.

    Sam. x


  • CantHandle ThisPain
    July 13, 2005
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    its got a lot of meanig and emotion and written very well. gr8 job


  • Brandy3 gold member
    June 25, 2005
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    This may be short but it's got alot of meaning.
    Brandy3

  • welbis
    June 22, 2005
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    So true!!.. written so simply yet says it all! Thanks and God Bless