I wish we never would have had that fight,
because I cry when you aren't in my sight.
I wish you would just give me one more shot,
so you could see I still love you a lot.
I wish you would try again to love me,
but it's not going to be that easy.
I wish you would just forgive and forget,
because I have loved you since we first met.
I wish that you would just feel the same way,
and I am praying that you will one day...
Author notes
This was a entry for a contest. Mike she really loves you!
Written June 22nd, 2005
A contest entry
- ~I Will Always Love You~ by -Kayleigh-.
300 points, ended June 23, 2005, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is good, your couplets balance well, and the feeling is very clear. Well done, Sadie!
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You keep writing!
Hi, this was so well writen. You have a special talent. I look at all those trophies that you have won. This one is a winner.
Grandma
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Amazing :-)
Hey this was an amazing poem!!! I loved it!!!! Its very well written and deep. Right from the heart. Great job!!! This is like one of my favorite writes yet. Seriously it is. It remindes me so much of my ex and I love it!!!!!! Your an excellent writer and this was amazing. Thanks for entering it in my contest, I really liked this one. Keep up the great writing and thanks for entering -BB
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Wow sadie sorry I haven't commented in awhile so whos mike??????
Can't wait to read a new one.
God bless
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well written poem. it was full of emotion. i know how this feels and yeah it hurts, but sometimes they come back that's usually good...
good luck in the contest.
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