I can feel it all again......the way he looked at me
that pain in my heart....that longing to be free
my throat tightening.... the heart beating slow
losing all my breath......trying to scream 'NO'
He laughs and breathes and moans....im covered in his sweat
he starts talking dirty..... id rather forget
Tonight now its all over.... its still plaguing my head
ill have bad dreams, my nightmares...will turn me in my bed
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Written June 22nd, 2005
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absolutely fantastic
This is probably the most powerful poem ive ever read.... This poem is dark, brooding and it goes straight thorugh ya like a tank shell... this poem is very graphical and i agree with CoMe UnDoNe sayin its strong... its is f***ing strong!!! im probably overeacting but to me... this poem is... just somehitng else... overall... excellent... u have benn thru a lot ali and we will always be here for ya -
heaps good
ur poems are so strong...u been thru so much u wil get better darl xox
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