I felt like I had been stabbed
When you told me it was over
All of my happiness
Went down the drain
I feel like I've been ripped in two
Straight down the middle
I am feeling incomplete
Like the other half of me is missing
I feel so hurt
So was everything a lie
Did all those special moments
Mean absolutely nothing to you
Is this what I get...
For giving you my trust,
For letting you in my heart,
For loving you
Now I'm in shock that
There's no more "I love yous'"
Cause you have found
Somebody new
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- Love by Pebbles.
300 points, ended July 7, 2005, 11 entries
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wow this was great may God bless you from pebbles xxxx
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wow this was greta i know the feel all to well. keep up the great writting.
Blessed Be
Kim -
yeah. thats how I feel, except my feelings for him aren't as strong as when we broke up. You will be writing a lot after this. I did. Heck, the only things I've posted so far are about Chris! Thats sad. IM me if u want to talk. I'm here. Good writing. I like "Did all those special moments mean nothing to you?" dont give up yet
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