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Same Shame

As time passes by,
You see faces that once sent,
People you've seen,
People you met,
And in life or death,
Or pain or shame,
Or in providence,
Your time remains the same, sane, boring place,
You've always been,
And no matter how hard you try to forget, to win,
You cant, so face up to it,
Your life is an endless abyss,
Of emptiness,
And the least you can do,
Is make up for it, admit your mistakes,
And give in,
Because you only have one life to live.

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Written June 21st, 2005

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  • sojourner252
    June 22, 2005
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    pretty darn good

    I like this last line... admit your mistakes and give in... because you only have one life to live....and that is the truth... we can't afford to screw it up too much, cuz it is all we got. I really do like the way you see things.