how could i do this?
i sit on a cold hard floor
in a ball i sit and cry
i am just sitting there inside my head screaming "WHY"???
why do i have to always hurt the ones i love the most?
I'm so stupid!!! i abandoned them when the helped me
i thrusted anger and hate as they tried to love on me
i used them and played them for fools....
when i was the fool all along
my heart was turned away and cold...
frozen and stiff with anger
but you tried to save me....
why couldn't i see that and listen?
the hate i felt cut in deep
deeper then the razor ever did or could
and you knew one day all the hate
would go away
the scars i still see
when I'm mad its like they bleed all over again....
so i just lay here on the floor and cry
hoping this isn't how i die
die here with this hateful heart...
empty soul and broken all apart.
so i pray and i pray and it got better
with my heart in the wrong place i get in a low point
so again i pray and pray this time nothing happened...
i lose my faith and it all came back.
so again on a stone floor cold and dark...
I'm laying here and its my heart..its bleeding from pain
because I'm doing wrong......again...
and like always i turned away.....
so i lay with hurts before you.....
I'm told to pray and believe
so i do....
and now I'm all better
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- enter and i'll love u forever!!!!!! by nobodys-girl.
300 points, ended September 19, 2005, 19 entries
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this is awesome.good luck and thankyou so much for entering my contest!
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This is really heartbreaking and emotional. It seems very personal. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and best of luck in my contest!
Keep it up.
~Lana
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i picked number 6....wooohooo
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This is a good write. It was quite enjoyable. My favorite part in this poem I believe was the line:
my heart was turned away and cold...
frozen and stiff with anger
but you tried to save me....
why couldn't i see that and listen?
That line captured my emotions... I guess I should specify that it intrigued me. Nevertheless though, you didn't follow my directions and/or rules. I asked for spell checked writing and a piece containing grammatics. You lacked proper grammar in this poem (such as all the lower case "i's" and such... Not good). So, this was a good read and I thank you for the post, but unfortunately you have been disqualified for not falling my rules. I'm sorry for this but I must be diplomatic as I specified in my rules. Thank you for the read, please do post more of your writings, and the best of luck to you in future contests.
Sincerely yours,
Alex (vocal anarchist) -
sweet
i really like this one
God heald my heart and mended me back together
man- dosen't that make u see how much he loves us
i think i'm falling in love with this poem and that
dosen't happen a lot.
love ya
keep writing
~Alexia~
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