A contest for the humor peeps
Who want to try at dark
A contest for the dark dudes
Who want the humor lark
A contest for a challenge
For four hundred in gold
Anyone that's brave enough
Shall get commented truth to be told
A contest for a good go
I will check who is who
I hope that peeps will enter
Yes, that means you
It's a sort of goal to reach
If you do it write one time
Maybe you'll want to switch subjects
For some dark or humor rhyme
You don't know what you're in for
But people should just try
My friend did one, it won her 4 trophies!
Now she has 20 that meets the eye
Author notes
Written June 21st, 2005
A contest entry
- Want To Hold Your Own Contest? by Topaz135.
600 points, ended July 2, 2005, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
1 - 5 of 5
-
Hello.
I really liked the flow of this poem. It is very good. Just so you know I'm a friend of kissing-eris' and I'm going to be helping her out at Angel's Haven.
Keeping writing poems! You are talented.
Krista -
Lol this is great elee thanks for the mention!
Lol
I would like to help ya do that contest sometime...
BUSHY
u enjoying holi?
cya sometime.
Bi
Lady anairO -
Dark humour? A subject one has to take care with.
Unfortunatley dark humour is most often associated with sex, and
much of the dark arena is blatantly ignored because the poets either cannot conceive
the area to be humorous. ah well
I will watch the contest with interest, hopefully as a poet and not as a Mod lol
topaz135 -
Thanks for the suggestions!
I think that I will modify it a little
-
Cool entry! I really like how this rhymes and makes sense. I really love the stanza:
"A contest for a challenge
For four hundred in gold
Anyone that's brave enough
Shall get commented truth to be told"
That's really creative!
I may suggest that you add in some punctuation so that it's just that little bit clearer and more grammatically correct. Also, I find that the line "Especially you" sounds a bit forced. I would suggest saying "Yes, that means you!".
Anyhow, this looks like a cool contest, I might enter!
Good luck in this contest!
~lavender shadows~
Adding your comment:
1 - 5 of 5
