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God's Sunshine

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The sun isn't shining here today Lord
I guess someone needs it more then me
now I usually do not mind sharing your sun
but I need a little sun myself to see

Send just enough to chase away the gray cloud
that seems to follow me all around  today
I only need a glimpse of your sunshine
to chase this one little gray cloud away

Now I know you have time when we need you
if I have to wait until tomorrow I won't mind
I'll find another way to lose these blues today
and a way to leave this gray cloud far Behind

Thank you Dear Lord for always listening to me
my love for you is still overwhelming and new
the one thing  you have taught me Dear Lord
when I feel alone I can always talk to you





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Written June 21st, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    September 20, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you for the nice comment. I do appreciate it. Alot of my poems are just written as the simple words that come in my thoughts. I have some scripture poems I would like you to read some time. I would like your honest opinion on them. Sometimes I am afraid my interpretation isnot right. Sandy

  • TheM0of silver member
    September 20, 2005
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    Awesome job

    I like the childlike quality of this. It has a neat personality all its own. A very well-crafted write.

    Awesome job, sister!

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 22, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you so much Sam for the wonderful comment. There are those days we just need a little more sunshine to keeps smiling. God Bless you and take care. Great to hear from you as always. Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 22, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you once again for the beautiful comment. I want to thank you for always reading my poetry. I so appreciate it. I hope you have a wonderful day. God Bless. Take care, Sandy

  • Samplette gold member
    June 21, 2005
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    God's Son is shining in my heart, but the Sun doesn't shine in my spirit today either. I am seeking relief in poetry as well. This is beautiful, shining brightly is your wonderful talent.
    Very nice...I send my love and prayers.
    Sam
  • Mia Donna
    June 21, 2005
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    Awww this was the greatest! It was absolutely so sweet. And I love, love, love your first stanza. Lovely write.
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