The sun isn't shining here today Lord
I guess someone needs it more then me
now I usually do not mind sharing your sun
but I need a little sun myself to see
Send just enough to chase away the gray cloud
that seems to follow me all around today
I only need a glimpse of your sunshine
to chase this one little gray cloud away
Now I know you have time when we need you
if I have to wait until tomorrow I won't mind
I'll find another way to lose these blues today
and a way to leave this gray cloud far Behind
Thank you Dear Lord for always listening to me
my love for you is still overwhelming and new
the one thing you have taught me Dear Lord
when I feel alone I can always talk to you
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Written June 21st, 2005
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WONDERFUL COMMENT
Thank you for the nice comment. I do appreciate it. Alot of my poems are just written as the simple words that come in my thoughts. I have some scripture poems I would like you to read some time. I would like your honest opinion on them. Sometimes I am afraid my interpretation isnot right. Sandy -
Awesome job
I like the childlike quality of this. It has a neat personality all its own. A very well-crafted write.
Awesome job, sister!
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Ah thank you so much Sam for the wonderful comment. There are those days we just need a little more sunshine to keeps smiling.
God Bless you and take care. Great to hear from you as always. Sandy
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Thank you once again for the beautiful comment. I want to thank you for always reading my poetry. I so appreciate it. I hope you have a wonderful day. God Bless. Take care, Sandy
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God's Son is shining in my heart, but the Sun doesn't shine in my spirit today either. I am seeking relief in poetry as well. This is beautiful, shining brightly is your wonderful talent.
Very nice...I send my love and prayers.
Sam
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Awww this was the greatest! It was absolutely so sweet. And I love, love, love your first stanza. Lovely write.
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