Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

friends

had some good
and had some bad
but overall
life is sad

you treated my good
than left me alone
you knew
i needed you

but you didnt care
only for yourself
your life is crazy
wish i could help

but i wont
because you wouldnt for me
i give in return
not before

i dont want to be hurt
youve done it before
i didnt think
that that was what friends were for

Author notes


Written June 21st, 2005

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • foreverrunning
    June 21, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    ahh...this is really good...and sad...i know exactly what you mean about friends treating you like this....i have the same problem...by the way...thanks for all the comments and applause

  • hidden Beauty
    June 21, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    beautiful

    very good! love the ryhming! keep up the good work!