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The One

I am the one
but you'll never know
because your too damn superficial
to see what lies before you.

you say you believe
when  they say "love at first sight"
what did your mind tell you
when I walked by?

did you turn your head
or make snide remarks?
did your heart cry out?
did you even make an effort
to know the real me?

Guess not
cause there you go
walking away
with your preppy ass girlfriend
have fun!
cause in a week
you'll be single again!

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Written June 21st, 2005

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  • TwistedInnocence
    September 22, 2005
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    hey omg! i louv this its so pretty! lol.. but yah its awesome! LOL! but neways gurl whats been up?
    Indi

  • hidden Beauty
    June 25, 2005
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    ummm gurlie it says... a.s.s!!lol sok i guess its ok with out da word neways!

  • AudioxRevolution
    June 21, 2005
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    pshhh! exactumundo! guys r soooo superficial! when i finished reading this awsome poem i was like "u go gurl! mmm hmmmm" lol and i luvd when u sed preppy bunny girlfriend cuz some gurls are like bunnies....*cough* *looks around*

  • nutcake
    June 21, 2005
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    cool poem. It shows what some guys are like. Very superficial. great write.