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Tomarrow

We all say tomorrow,
Tomorrow I'll mow the lawn
Tomorrow I'll call you
Tomorrow I'll get right with God,
Guess what,
Tomorrow never comes!
You can wait all day and night for it
but it never will!
Tomorrow is a fool's hope
a hope that a better day is to come.
I'm gonna live my life today
instead of tomorrow
or even yesterday
Cause I don't wanna die
thinking tomorrow...
I wanna die...
Today

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Written June 21st, 2005

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  • AudioxRevolution
    June 21, 2005
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    truthful, honest, and awsome

    it was reeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeealy good but i didnt like the end 2 lines very much cuz ur one of my bffs and i dont want u 2 die! but the rest of it, was so true. i mean, literally right before i read this i told my mom tomorrow i would vacuum. lol. tomorrow i'll call janisse. tomorrrow i'll commment again saying its tomorrow!
    Edited on Jun 21, 7:17 p.m. because 'wrong face'.

  • HeatherMrie2205
    June 21, 2005
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    I am not sure what to think of the end of this piece, but overall I thought all was nicely worded. My favorite line is "tomorrow is a fool's hope..." How true that is. I think more people need to live their lives day by day instead of saying they will do things tomorrow, cause like you said, who knows if tomorrow will come or what will be left when it does. Great write, loved the content!
    Heather*