The first kiss is often what tells you "this person is for me", the way your lips mingle and melt and your tongues touch and intertwine. But, I remember something special happened to me one night, something so different that now any other kiss seems meaningless and I am empty.
Our eyes met at a summer party. Yes, I saw his face across a crowded room (apologies to Rodgers and Hammerstein), and he smiled at me and toasted me with sparkling champagne. We talked inconsequentialities and I was dripping for him. Then he took my hand and invited me into the darkened waiting garden, with neither preamble nor permission, and then he smothered my half-open lips with his and forced his tongue into my mouth, pressing, probing and tasting me.
And then his tongue seemed to grow longer and firmer pushing down my throat. Oh Jesus Fucking Christ, I could hardly breathe as his tongue grew hard and full and seemingly erect like a raping proboscis.
I felt as though I were impaled by something more than just a tongue as (with my saliva pouring down my chin) I groaned, eyes tight closed, loins quivering with lust and fear, he raped my eager open mouth with brutal thrusting authority.
I felt myself growing weak and dizzy; and the night sky spun around me as he held me in his arms, his fingers clenching and unclenching, kneading my trembling buttock flesh. And, when I came to my senses again, I was alone lying on the summer grass, cold and covered with morning dew.
I was shocked to find the ample taste of sperm filling my bruised mouth. What had happened? I shall never know. But neither an ordinary kiss nor the tenderest lovemaking can never mean anything to me now.
Author notes
More unusual erotica at www.allpoetry.com/poem/1372383 .
Written June 21st, 2005
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this left room to think about what happened during the night...i liked it...great job...<3Anna
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That is what happens when a kiss comes with more then lips and tongues. I'm suprised the girl didn't suffocate though. I don't think I'd be in such awe with only that 'kiss', I'd probably need at least a 'kiss' back.
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Good loard Edna, I must say you are my hero, this was an amazing write and I love the way you wrote it. Kisses in exchange for mouth fucking... great write.
-Ash
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THIS IS AWESOME!!
I love it. You are such an amazing writer!
Keep up the excellent work!
Love
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This is very, very funny! Hilarious! LOL! (I have embarassed myself by laughing out loud in real life, and so I put this little bit of sarcastic witticism here as a small revenge.)
"his fingers clenching and unclenching, kneading my trembling buttock flesh"
I like this part v. much, as the first is full of suspense and tension, and was followed through by, in my humble opinion, the most gratifying, most intelligent line in the whole story. It may not have been as sophisticated as that "proboscis" bit, but it definitely fleshed out a dirty, twisted side of the characters, which of course made the story, for little old me, v. clever indeed.
P.S. One too many m's in "summmer" may be mmm-delicious...and then again, not.
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tee hee, that definatly is very twisted!! I thought it was going to be an incubus, bt it wasn't as she was still alive afterwards! Very curious about what happened :S
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Ooo very well written. It is mysterious and it gives me the feeling as if the person were abducted by an alien or something of the like.
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wow, very different to what i normally read, but i must say it kept me intrigued and i did find it rather amusing..
thanks for sharing
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very powerful and deep. i can almost feel the actions. great word choice and usage.
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This was an interesting write, I like it There are so many talented writters here...I love to read how each ones mind thinks. Well written...that was one special kiss indeed.
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THis was a very wel put together poem story I love it thanks for stoping by my page not sure what you thought on the poem but you took the time to have a look so thanks for that I thought this was great lots of love Robin...aka SH
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Yes, proboscis. That is the erotic and mysterious bit.
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Proboscis?
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Passionately wicked!
FuckingFantastic!!! Spectacular!!! Passionately wicked!
I love your candor. You are a brilliant writer.
The way you tell a story with such power and emotion.
I also love your spirit.
You are a very interesting highly intelligent women.
Two thumbs up for your "That Special Kiss!" Bravo sweetheart!!
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