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Alive?

The most splendid time of the day would have to be 3:00 in the morning
That's the time of day where my life seems so the least boring.
I meet the most splendid people at this time of day,
The time of day when the normal people sleep, and us borderline folk are at bay
The time of day when nothing can go wrong
at home, all alone
This is the time I am most awake, most creative, when I make the leaste mistakes

Distractions Cause me distress, although this poem would be great... I must now get some rest...

Sleep the day away... till I can join you folk again, during the witching hour, my day will begin

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FUCK.... Heart Crushes....
Written June 21st, 2005

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  • Twol0st2bf0und
    June 21, 2005
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    hey lovely, great write... its so true, i was thinkin bout that shit lastnight when we were talking at like 4... lol well love ya

  • davidishere
    June 21, 2005
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    excellent

    i liked this poem because i related to it all, i never go to sleep at night, and i just enjoyed your poem, keep it up, the poems and the not sleeping at the right hour

  • Human Mechanism
    June 21, 2005
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    Aye.

    I work 3rd shift, and have done so for almost a year now. The night is my day. The darkness, my sunshine, casting enlightened shadows of inspiration on my mind.

    I do most of my writing at this hour.