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Outside

On a cold winter night my friends came over
To bounce upon the trampoline
Billy,Nick,David and more
Jaimie,Too we felt so free

And there we found hours of bliss
Hopping upon the bouncing floor
A day I'm glad I did not miss
Whatever else is childhood

I can go there as I please
upon sweet wings of memory
Happy thoughts it will always tease
Those happy hours of bliss for me

Author notes

This was about a guy who I liked when I was 16 and we were next door neighbors and he would come over every nigt..but then sadley he moved away...
Written June 20th, 2005

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  • xSarahx
    June 22, 2005
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    Aww.... how sad!! But it's such an awesome poem. YOU ROCK!!!
    adds you to favourites list

    Keep up the awesome work, chicky!!

    Sarah

  • cheerbear69
    June 20, 2005
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    aww! how sad!! gurl this is awesome!! keep on writing awesome awesome poems!! luv ya! xoxox tiff

  • LilSmurfie03
    June 20, 2005
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    I really like this poem! It's simple and sweet and something everyone can relate to. Thanks for sharing it! Keep up the great writing!