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I am

I am a girl with big dreams and likes animals.
I wonder where my life will lead me.
I hear Children crying for help.
I see people helping other people.
I want to stay in touch with my friends.
I am a girl with big dreams and likes animals.

I pretend to be married to the richest guy.
I feel sad and hurt when friends get mad at me.
I touch a dolphins body.
I worry about the future if its going to be good or worse.
I cry when I am angry or hurt.
I am a girl with big dreams and likes animals.

I understand that world can be bitter.
I say what is on my mind.
I dream about my future.
I try to do my best.
I hope for the best for my family.
I am a girl with big dreams and likes animals.

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Ok yall i know this is dumb but I put alot of thought into this poem..
Written June 20th, 2005

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  • crazyjadey
    August 17, 2005
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    thats a really good poem its very touching i like it alot .......


  • xSarahx
    June 22, 2005
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    I don't think it's dumb. This is really awesome.
    I had to write a poem like this in grade 7, (it's on this site.. somewhere in all my stuff) and it is also called I Am, because that's the format it's in. So I take it you know of "I Am" poems? It looks alot like the same way I had to write mine.
    Awesome job, I enjoyed reading it.


    Sarah

  • cheerbear69
    June 20, 2005
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    lol!!! this is awesome!!! its not dumb! dont be so hard on urself ppl se talent in u that you cant se in urself!! keep it up xoxox tiff