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Will

What will I say to the people?
To you in your time of need,
But go with love and understand
Even this is for a reason, what?
I do not know...
Some how, you are heroes
One at a time
Case by case
Not forgotten, children, mothers, sisters -
- Sons, our fathers -- there are many things
About this world I do not understand
Death, hate, war, genocide
How the rich white elite and
Zionist influence betrays
those that need so little,
but medicine and love
Perhaps shoes and school, but men
in tall buildings with quick phones
And no eyes watch the spin of dollars
while the forgotten rot away
Treated as if diseased animals

I will not fight your war
Pump your oil, be your nigger
I want to bring the clouds down
In a rush of retribution
And lay your treasure to waste,
and I will...
When I look up
And find a mirror into
Tyranny, laboratory invented
war germs that have cures
No one will know about until
It starts to really hit home,
As if these fools think
It already hasn't.

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Written June 20th, 2005

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  • Rhynoceros
    June 22, 2005
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    brilliant

    powerful message... powerful words...
    nicely written, nicely said.
    creative, unique and intresting.
    worth the read.. well worth the read...
    your a genius


  • agalford7053
    June 21, 2005
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    wow you did a great job Jeremi! I like this. And I do agree with you.... why do the people that need us the most go fogotten??
    BRAVO!


  • NurseChilly gold member
    June 21, 2005
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    Bravo hun.. bravo..
    Jeremi.. this is quite a stunning piece, very moving hun.. made me catch my breath with your ponderings

    ~GILL~xxx