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Brain. Dead.

i dont know who i am any more.
i dont know what i am doing.
everything is messed up.
help.
i dont know who to talk to.
i feel like everyone is gone.
im alone in my sorrow.
why.
i hate my life so much.
its so painful to live through.
everyday is a struggle.
lost.
i can even share my emotions.
feelings must be glitches in my system.
where do i go from here.
trapped.

Author notes

i dont remember exactly what was going on @the time.
many things were not going according to plan.
i hate it when i explode due to all the pent up pain inside me.
*sigh*
i feel like its not finished either...hmm.
what do u think?
Written April 25th, 2005

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  • Coolbear4
    July 4, 2005
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    A good write..full of anger ,confusion...good luck in the contest


  • the man
    June 20, 2005
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    terrific

    this poems got me on the edge of my seat so to say, need more hehe...its really good though i like it, best of luck in the contest!