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Embracing The Sunrise

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The warmth of your body next to mine
as thoughts linger of the love we shared
I rest my hand upon your chest
gently I caress your bare shoulder.

I feel you breathe upon my arm
our legs once again are intertwined
the closeness we share touches my soul
I can only sigh as I watch you sleep

Rubbing my hand upon your chest
your eyes open and look into mine
my hand gently touches your face
you smile lovingly then draw me near

As you hold me in your arms I smile
then I whisper how much I love you
the love we shared was so heavenly
a feeling so beautiful it is unforgettable

There is no hiding the longing we feel
my desire of you rises with the sun
as you embrace me I surrender once more
our day begins where our night ended


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Written June 20th, 2005

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  • AWW!
    I wish I could wake up with my hubby's arms wrapped around me. An uplifting write filled with love. thanks for sharing

    Mylee

  • TheElf gold member
    January 24

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    Excellent

    This is beautiful. The imagery and mtre and fabulous.

    The passion for each other oozes out. As does your desire. The poem is discreetly erotic in that it is suggestive.

    Defintely romantic. One of the best I've read on this site.


  • badfate
    April 24, 2007

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    splendid !!!!!

    I will love you in everything...
    On air that we breathe,
    In dawning of the afternoon,
    In the twilight,
    In the death...


    • Sandygram silver member
      April 24, 2007
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      Lovely Comment

      Hello, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poem. Your comment is very nice most appreciated. You take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 21, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Thank you so much for the lovely comment on this poem. I so appreciate it. It is always nice to hear from you.God Bless and take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 21, 2005
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    WONDERFUL COMMENT

    Ah thank you so much Melanie for this beautiful comment. How are you? I hope all is going well with you and your mom and your whole family. I am doing great. The ten kids I adopted on here keep me busy. I don't get to read and comment as much as I would like too anymore. God bless you and your Ap husband If I was younger I would look for one myself. Take care my friend. Always wonderful to hear from you. Sandy
    Edited on Jun 21, 8:35 because ''.

  • Sandygram silver member
    June 21, 2005
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    Thank you for the nice comment. Great contest. Sandy

  • BhajGovindam silver member
    June 21, 2005
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    Awwww....Its so beautiful sandy..
    Lovely..full of tender emotions... touching thoughts...
    Lovable...good luck in the contest!!
    Luv
    Neha

  • luckynsincere gold member
    June 20, 2005
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    Oh Sandy, I really love your writes like this one.. It is absoultely beautiful.... Thank you for sharing this!
    Melanie

  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    June 20, 2005
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    Beautifully enchanting. It has such wonderful imagery, is written flawlessly and really leaves a sense of comfort and love with you when you read it. Outstanding job here. Gypsy
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