Your kiss lingers on my cheek...
Promise you'll stay
Promise you'll hold me
Closer, closer...
nothing separates us now
we are one as before birth
I pledge my heart to you
Promise you'll make me whole again
Secrets...
you face is unclear,
distorted dreams...
I realise...
You have taken the same form
I weep but you hold me...
You tell me our love is forbidden our love is forbidden
but I know in my heart...
blessed, accursed shadows,
taunt me no longer
what brings joy
and truth,
I shall follow
If I love I shall follow my heart but it is forbidden
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Author notes
...more self questioning...dreams focusing around this at the moment...
Written June 20th, 2005
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Very songlike, love the way you composed this piece. Is it a song? Thanks to for the wonderful comment on my piece. I have another added you may like. allpoetry.com/poem/1491538 , if you have the time.
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aw honey this is beautiful. wow i havent commented on your stuff for so long...this is an amazing way to bring me back!
love ya
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This is unquestionably heartfelt and passion. Yes, forbidden love, it is tough at times, but never give up! Be well!
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Nonononono. No self questioning. Well, maybe. But like you said. True love surpasses gender. This was indeed well written. It's sad, but it has an aura of happy defiance. I like that. Reminds me of Gackt's lyrics, somehow.. heh.
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Very sweet poem
You tell me our love is forbidden our love is forbidden
Love those two lines. Keep up the good work x -
ooo very good ur v telented its a great poem and very emotional and i think i know whats forbidden and i completley understand if it is what i think yeah anyway keep writing xxx
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hello mina's freind i love ur poem its a nice write really sweet made me think..excellent vocabulary and some beautiful imagery..you must be talented, well done!
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this is a really thoughtfull poem, i really love it cos it has loadsa emotion and flows well. its also sad
keep it up! xxx
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i love this! you are so talented! great job! your imagery is impeckable and your words float on air! great job!
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pretty, and song-like... writen with so much tallent - but then of you i would expect no less! great write, well done -x-x-x-
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this is sweet! awesome poem! ^-^
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wow i loved this, it was a brilliant poem, seems familar to me, well done and keep on writing x x x x
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