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The Axe that Shines

Heart beating fast and feeling very nervous
looking at your watch, waiting for that time
Fingers start to tingle, and your body gets heavy
This is the first time that you have ever planned this

You start to smile as the time gets near
You get up slowly and feel your body shake
but you take a deep breath and start to walk
Slowly thinking on what you are about to do

Open the door without a sound
And stepping through the hall as quiet as possible
Your holding your axe over your shoulder
Tucked in its case so it wont get dirty

You opened the door slowly as possible
And you look around to see familiar faces
You take out your axe, the axe that shines
As everyone looks at me, with a face of horror

Holding the axe, with my own 2 hands
and looked at them as they got up
Putting their heads down and walking away from me
As i walk with my axe after them, onto the stage to perform



Author notes

As you notice, an "axe" in this poem is not really an axe but some musicians like i use the word axe as in a guitar.  hope u liked it
Written June 20th, 2005

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  • Stup1d K1d
    June 20, 2005
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    thanks


  • Ave Maria
    June 20, 2005
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    in meghanese it means good job!


  • Stup1d K1d
    June 20, 2005
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    uhhh...?


  • Stup1d K1d
    June 20, 2005
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    word


  • Ave Maria
    June 20, 2005
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    wow drop it like its hot<3

  • a world of grey
    June 20, 2005
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    word.

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