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Forever destroyed

The once untouched,
forever ruined.

The cool blade touched the skin,
finally breaking through resistance to destroy.

The blade heats up and gets hot like evil.
The conclusion,
the cool, innocence becomes heated with hatred.

Forever ruined,
the once untouched,
her resolve,
her mind,
her life.

Forever destroyed.

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Written June 19th, 2005

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  • illegalfairy
    June 19, 2005
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    thanks...i'm glad you liked it..i don't. but yeah thanks again. i appreiciate your comment.
    ~later~


  • racergirl212006
    June 19, 2005
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    wow very powerful write. i like it a lot. this really kept me into the poem. and once again i remember why i added you to my favorites. awesome job. keep up the good work. you are so talented