The phone is on but you're not calling
pride can be so hard to swallow...when no ones wrong.
But right or wrong well we're still fighting,
and I'm okay with apologizing, but I need, for you to let me.
And I know that we'll just do this again
And I know that I'll just ruin another of your good days...
But if you'll let me..I'd like to try one more time to do this one thing right....
So I'll leave a message if I have to...
write a letter, I'll mail it to you
'cuz I need for you to hear me
And I know that we've done all this before
and I know that I just ruined, another of your good days..
But if you'll let me, I've got to try, one more time to do this one thing right
you're worth it to me..
Author notes
if I have to explain, you probably just won't get it...<3 slow paced almost lullabyish commas and "..."s are just tossed in where i pause when i'm singing it
Written June 19th, 2005
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I like it a lot! I could kinda sing it to myself as I was reading it. I, personally, would probably break up some of the lines in a defferent spot than you've done here. To me that would emphasize the point of the pauses and breaks. For instance, I would actually make "when no ones wrong" it's own line, because it comes off as an after-thought to the sentence. But I think the content, the wording, the flow are all great! Well said!
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