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every thing you need

what can I do for you you notice me,
I wish I had your heart and the key,
I loved you,
I wanted you every day,
I wanted you to walk my way,
you onced liked me,
you know we have memories,
there still on my mind,
I wanted love of a different kind,
I still wanted you love,
like a gift from heaven above,
I miss your touch,
to me you ment so much,
I try to forget but you come back then leave,
these thoughts I cant conseve,
sometimes I think you were made for me,
you act like nothing happened,
you may think Im crazy,
but im all you need baby


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Written June 19th, 2005

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  • tootsiepop106
    June 25, 2005
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    beautifully understanding

    i agree with wandika i can really understand wat ur saying cuz i 1nce felt that way but there guyz wat can u expect. it took me a long time 2 understand that. nice write! much luv!!

    p.s thanx much 4 ur comment on pssionate healing!! i appreciate


  • Wandika gold member
    June 23, 2005
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    I understand the emotion here. A painful time. Very nice poem and work that is pleasing to read. Jim