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In love

I think Im in love,
but I wont say it let the words hang above,
for the pain of hurt,
I dont want the pain of the worst,
to be broken hearted,
I wish for loove till Im dead,
before this has been said,
I wish I could say I was in love,
it would be heaven sent above,
but it wont last long,
like a played out song,
but I think Im in love

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Written June 19th, 2005

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  • Dark Deminsion
    June 19, 2005
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    If you think it won't last, it won't. Simple enough. Don't try to deny your feelings for someone, but don't overestimate them either. True love is a precious gift that comes along only so often. Don't waste it on childish fears.
    You'll hurt yourself more than they ever could.
    And, good write. As you can see, it got quite a reaction.