Ripped the breeze of Arsenic in white hair
slipped my Beloved laced with salty drink taste
Clench with sweet bitterness lost in flair
caught up in a Delirious moment suddenly erased
As Empty conclusion sought my love affair
trapped Frenzy gazed in a broad captured
finally giving me a wimped Gonorrhea fusion
all Hemorrhage of nastiness wrapped enraptured
With swirling visions of warped of Illusion
sat up Jolly danced in a twisted drink
Kill all my emotions drawn in one night
lost in a suicide note dripped with stain ink
Lacerate from blood stained with inner light
as the Mirror holds my reflected wound
holding the Nonsense trapped in blood
of wild Orgy sucked in Passion marooned
Left me Quench for more pressed in a flower bud
as Radiant heat burning desires informant
Wasting in a blistering heat suddenly Shatter
a glass on top where Truth lays dormant
Unjust her Violent rays in the opened cut glare
As I lay of Weird thoughts crossed my mind
XXX-lovers trapped posing nakedness bare
as purifies to my needs begging to say Yes declined
in the heat of the passion Zone declared
Author notes
Written June 18th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Quoting The Alphabet by Festering Eye Sore.
450 points, ended June 28, 2005, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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This was the most challenging poem I have ever done in awhile. Saddie23
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Great job! In order too! I am impressed! I tried that, but in the end I had to switch the order a bit. Good luck in the contest.
TW -
This was difficult in the last stanza. Thank you for commneting and the challenge. Saddie23
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This is very good. I think you're the first person so far who has entered lines for the last few letters of the alphabet. Also, you put them in order, which had to have been pretty difficult, and was not required.
Great job. Thanks for taking the time to enter, and best of luck in the contest.
**Arsenic Cheerios**
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