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Anonymous Person

I don't know you
but i don't care
Ive talked to you a couple of times
and i know you complete me

Ive never seen you
but that doesn't mean anything
I love you
and we belong together

When you speak
i listen
Wondering what your gonna say next

Wishing that i was closer to you
so we could be together forever
I know you think this is weird
but this is how i feel

The way you speak
and the things you say
It's like it's just you and me
and i don't have to care about anything or anyone

Once again your so far
and all i can do is cry
but you'll never know
my feelings for you

Author notes

Um this poem i know dosn't make sense but w/e!!! I hate this poem but then again i love it and it' s the weirdest poem ive wrote so far!!! LOL
Written June 19th, 2005

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  • shouri13
    June 20, 2005
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    KKKKKKIIIIIIIAAAARRRRRRRAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! i love this poem its definateally differient and youre poetry keeps things interesting and it makes me think (is that burniong tires i smell...oh no shes thinking again lol) but still this is an amazing poem for an amazing poet lol i <3 u kiara and i'm really sad that i wont see you for a long time

  • SouthernBelle09
    June 19, 2005
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    um..lol i like it,is this true? just wondering..its definatley different,but most of yours are and i love all of them,your a great poet.great write -Laura