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The journey of life

A journey of life starts with a first step.
A young baby fresh into the world as they say,
A dyper change, some food today,
His first nap comes this way,
His parents waking up to comfort him,
As the day come to a dim.
The journey of life takes its toll,
The baby turns in to doll,
Blond hair blue eyes,
His smile as bright as the sun,
As a young boy he always thinks he's right,
He won’t stop until he's won,
Then he falls asleep into the night,
With nothing to fear no fright.  
As the trees get bigger,
And there leaves start to grow,
Where the wind blows,
Where the branches come low.
But eventually it will be gone,
Gone forever into the night,
But out of its darkness there will be light.
As the clouds pass over,
As the light comes to dark,
And we flout away on dream ark.
And the clouds go grey for the rain,
And they get heavier and drip into the drain.
Our journey of life grows,
A boy into a man,
With a job, a wife, a son,
The journey of life starts again,
With his son over and over again,
Until his life come to an end.
the journey of life is complete,
but life goes on for us to meet.

Author notes

i wrote this for a performance but i thought i would put it on here to.
Written June 19th, 2005

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  • CJDenton
    July 15, 2005
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    nice one JU, although i thought it was dyper....


  • LovedIntoExistence
    June 27, 2005
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    Diaper


  • StrawberryShortcake
    June 24, 2005
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    wow, nice write. you kinda lost the rhyming pattern part way in...no it didn't. was there a pattern? maybe but i still think that it flowed very well. Oh, you can probably ignore most of that and whats all this ^ about copying?
    ~Sarah~ xxx


  • Fortune
    June 19, 2005
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    how else do u spell it

  • SixPennyGirl
    June 19, 2005
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    um dyper? please tell me this wasnt a copy of another song or poem like usual cos it sound american. very good if it is urs though

    rae x x

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