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Death.

Tormenting screams intrude the mind.
 Arms all tied, both wrist cut open.
Twisted intestines in a deathly bind.
 Rope holding the neck real tight.

Eye's are fading starring into time.
 A crimson line flows down the cheek.
The body knows it is time to die.
 The lungs take a slow breath.

The tears fall.
 The black comes.
Senses dull.
 It is no more.


Author notes

Its not really a poem or really anything. its been awhile since i wrote and anger has been an issues so ding ding this is what i got. so dont be harsh i know its bad.
Written June 18th, 2005

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